 pullmytrigger
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Date: December 11, 2005 @ 9:44 PM
i got scared at first! i was like what the heck but it paid off!
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BOWILLIE
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Date: December 11, 2005 @ 9:45 PM
hot track!!
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Ghostie
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Date: December 11, 2005 @ 11:28 PM
 love the driving beat, cool vocals Great song!!!
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 takamineg240
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 12:40 AM
I like it man. Sucks the wait to start is so long tho. 
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 tooles
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 1:19 AM
Another good tune. You're right, the recording on this one makes for a much smoother listen.
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zique
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 1:39 AM
Rippin tune !!! Love the vocals and dig the ultra low tones...The bass sounds great for being dropped to the bone...as does the guitar parts.Drums are rockin.like the intro...Nice
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 WildasRapids
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 4:10 AM
awesome tune. Although i had to really crank the volume just to hear the vocals and the rest of the instruments its very good 
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 ShadowMom
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 9:30 AM
Oooh, yeah, the bass is great..and it does sound much smoother. Love the lyrics, too... 
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 guitaroo
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 10:38 AM
Yes...I agree...good bass....good intro too  Good Job
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victorsskull
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 2:06 PM
pretty cool
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 LeNoraJaye
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 2:12 PM
 that was powerful. The bass was rockin.
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litesenseative
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 3:24 PM
The intro is quite like creed. The song had a lot of energy, i thought vocal's again were good especaily in the chorus they had a lot of emotion
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shutyatrap
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 5:43 PM
I like the intimate feeling at the start of the track with the guitar and drums kicking in. The song then opens sounding like a lot of tunes that it bows its head to. The vocal is really good. Intense and full of sincerity I feel. I like the bass on this track too All up its something to be proud of. A good quality recording that takes you on an intense emotional journey.
Steven Davies
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 tsand19151
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 7:06 PM
wow...kick ass rock track. ok, count me in, the bass rocks...nice playing. seems as if the guitars could be louder...but then I'm a guitarist. loving the drums as well. very slammin track....
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farfor44
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 7:27 PM
Love the introoh yea then it picks up then it revisits the mellow part..very intresting dynamicallythe vocals are great,and the drumbs are very hotdoing some pretty complicated things very goodloving the bass and  work..in conclusion-Very impressive track
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songbird
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 7:44 PM
Whoa...was rockin out listening to this one 
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evansorchid
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Date: December 12, 2005 @ 11:28 PM
Very impressive!!!! I really like the tone on the bass guitar. The electric guitar reminds me a bit of early Smashing Pumpkins circa Gish. Love the dynamic chorus. Song could be 'tightened up' a bit. There were a couple of places where the timing seemed a bit off. Thanks for letting me know about this.
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Rodrica
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Date: December 13, 2005 @ 5:40 AM
I like the suspense with the intro and the alternating heavy/ligher parts. Great bass. Loads of passion in the vocals. Love that darkness in the atmosphere. Great stuff!
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independentm...
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Date: December 13, 2005 @ 10:28 AM
Oh yeah! Works for me bigtime! Good stuff! (Beautiful in the softer parts and angry as all hell in the heavy places!)
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IndigoGirl
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Date: December 13, 2005 @ 2:53 PM
That intro was FANTASTIC. Really loved it, this song has a great feel to it. You'll go far
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PrincessTast...
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Date: December 14, 2005 @ 1:17 PM
Here's a watermelon  don't say I "never feed you". You mentioned Creed but I think this sounds more like Soundgarden or maybe vintage Pearl Jam! It's delicious. Like the phasing at the end.
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deerok
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Date: December 14, 2005 @ 3:18 PM
i don't think the scream is necessary...nice intro tho'...vocals are just a little flat in the chorus but it's good 'never'...i like the lyrics so far, it's pretty catchy...i think a harmony would do well in the chorus...i'm at the drum solo part and you go into the chorus again but i'd like it better if you went right to the bridge since you go back into the chorus right after that...then maybe you could double up the chorus at the end for a bigger finish...nice job
cheers, d
'wasting time' & 'the bottom of a bottle' are new...one is fully produced and the other i'm just trying to arrange so production aside please
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Humandragon
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Date: December 16, 2005 @ 1:23 AM
This song if fin great, sounds like tool a bit, or maybe a perfect circle
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happyhappyhappy
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Date: December 16, 2005 @ 10:24 PM
That bass guitar in the beginning INDEED is reminisient of Tool. Then you find out it's actually a guitar. The REAL bass guitar is playing a kick-rectum bass line. Actually, the whole song kinda sounds like Tool, and I think the style of the music lacks a bit of originality. But that's a personal bias: I like weird rock music. I listen to the Residents.
To get back on track, the recording displays excellent performance. Especially in the drums. They never miss a beat despite the complex fills.
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Lemieux1
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Date: December 16, 2005 @ 11:55 PM
Hey very nice song. Like the others says nice bass, nice drum to. Maybe the guitar was'ent loud enough. Nice vocal to. Post more guys. Keeep up the good work.
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saetan
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Date: December 28, 2005 @ 1:09 AM
Intro was awesome. The bass is killer in this track. I love the vocal changes. I must agree with Lemieux that guitar is hidden. Wouldn't be bad to have a single guitar in the left ear, but later through in a second on the right or middle right and give this some more dimension. Pretty cool though guys.
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100thmonk
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Date: December 28, 2005 @ 1:19 AM
okay,
first off, i like the song as a whole, and i realize that the mix is not really there yet, but since all i can say that is usefully critical about it centres around details regarding the mix.
if you mixed it different the minor weaknesses in the performance would be very hard to notice.
tonally i really like the sound of the bass, guitar, vocals, and kick drum.
the rest of the kit sound like pizza boxes because they need compression,reverb and eq desparately. oh yeah and that gating on the hi-hats sound kinda bad at the beginning, cutting the sustain of the cymbal off.
and where is the snare!? it keeps dissappearing! that snare should be slapping my face just like the kick is doing for a truly effective sound.
the live stuff is streaming now and i realize you've lost a bit of ground in the power of this stuff recording in the studio.
the guitar is mixed too low, and probably could be doubled black sabbath style, one in each speaker to really kick some hoop!
okay, i will apologize to you if my way of saying things has got you thinking i don't like it, it's just about production, and is not about what is obviously a good song.
please stop by and get critical with me some time if you feel inclined.
as for the vox, they sound a little to forward but that would be better with a touch more guitar in the mix.
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WildasRapids
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Date: January 16, 2006 @ 4:14 AM
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GeneHilbert
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Date: January 16, 2006 @ 9:31 AM
I agree the vocals need to be a little hotter in the mix in some areas. The mix as a whole is in need of work, levels are all over the place. However, the song is a good tune and worthy of the effort to make it better. Vocal diction and pitch are good but there are a couple of places where both get sloppy. Be aware of proper vocal technique – and never be satisfied with a substandard performance. Your art is the sum expression of your being, always strive for perfection.
Kewl Tune - Good Job
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brokensystem
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Date: March 8, 2006 @ 5:21 AM
it reminds me of that song by TOOL called ,,,, ahhhhh daam forgot the name , but i love that style ,
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KaneRoenor92
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Date: September 30, 2006 @ 12:47 AM
I enjoyed it....great music.
Long Days and Pleasant Nights,
Jim
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nicholaskarl
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Date: November 30, 2006 @ 6:15 PM
Awesome song, the vocals are sweet, love the bass, guitar, drums are really well played. Good track
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moam
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Date: November 30, 2006 @ 6:18 PM
Damn, great intro  I fucking love your voice!! Almost reminds me a little of the style of Cold, and Cold is one of my favorite bands ever and your scream sounds kick fuckin' ass!!! Damn, I am lovin' this I love how powerful and emotional the chorus is The part near the ending where the music start breaking up sounds amazing, and then the final chorus  Damn cool shit
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joycedavis
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Date: December 14, 2006 @ 3:30 PM
wow...this is a wild ass great song. thx for doing it and then sharing with us---peace---jd
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Snoogans775
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Date: December 14, 2006 @ 11:58 PM
this is pretty raw, maybe just gigging it more would help polish some of it. A lot of energy, but when the diction goes sloppy, it loses some power, crappy diction is a dangerous tool, it's hard to use right.
I like the drumming a lot, though I feel like the part @ 3.45 was probably recorded improperly, everybody lost sync a little bit there.
the worst part about all this is the recording, it's better than bed, but worse than better.
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Opossum
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Date: December 16, 2006 @ 1:43 AM
Excellent track in my opinion. I especially like the riff at the beginning and the percussive tones throughout.
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KitRumble
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Date: December 16, 2006 @ 4:06 AM
awesome intro and that bass is killer on top of a killer track...yeah the levels are off but if you listen past that there is one hell of a good track with superb vocals. Bridge is terrific and the whole track is catchy....remember me when your famous !!
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DrowningBetty
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Date: December 19, 2006 @ 1:29 AM
i love how the gain rings out before the vocals come back in, then builds back up for the chorus part. personally i'd prefere some more volume on the drums but over all it was an awsome tune!
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vzeye
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Date: January 26, 2007 @ 5:55 PM
 
The track keeps getting better as it plays on. Super!
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